Comic 20 - Petty Beach, Page 9

Posted on 17th Aug 2013, 2:14 PM in Petty Beach
Petty Beach, Page 9
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Sajan Rai 17th Aug 2013, 2:14 PM edit delete
Sajan Rai
Whoarrgh, sorry for the hiatus. Kinda took a four-day break there. But I guess I've been working on this at the same pace I've been uploading it, page a day. So went back home for my brother's birthday and watched some Seinfeld and Curb. This one, again, I'm not totally satisfied with - I found myself pretty indecisive about colouring, but I've noticed that when that's the case it's due to lazy inkwork. Maybe i'll look at it tomorrow and be more fond of it, that's usually what happens. Regardless, sorry for the delay!

Comments:

gary cramer 17th Aug 2013, 3:53 PM edit delete reply
gary cramer
SR, this just keeps getting better, the underwater scene is spot on.
Sajan Rai 17th Aug 2013, 7:33 PM edit delete reply
Sajan Rai
Cheers :D I'm looking forward to somehow earning some money so I can get some bristol board instead of working on the crappy paper I have been. If I get time to do it, tomorrow's page should be nice!
Unka John 17th Aug 2013, 4:01 PM edit delete reply
Unka John
I think you might be bothered by the values being too close in the bottom 3 panels.

Obviously the fish knows he can't have any pudding unless he eats his meat.
Sajan Rai 17th Aug 2013, 7:30 PM edit delete reply
Sajan Rai
Values being tone/colour/spacing? My housemate did suggest I make the lines of those frames thicker - I might try make them white or something as well.
quetzlsacatanango 17th Aug 2013, 4:19 PM edit delete reply
quetzlsacatanango
Thumbs up for Pink Floyd reference.
Shine On.
Sajan Rai 17th Aug 2013, 7:29 PM edit delete reply
Sajan Rai
Drew those hands and realised it was too neat an opportunity to pass up. Also, I really liked that illustration - I remember my uncle had the CD booklet folded back so that that image was the cover.
Waxwinged 19th Aug 2013, 8:11 PM edit delete reply
Waxwinged
Better late than never. One can never underestimate the value of a few buffer-strips, though!
Sajan Rai 23rd Aug 2013, 2:19 AM edit delete reply
Sajan Rai
Very good point actually, I'll take that one on board for my unproductive streaks! I have lots of weird little sketches related to this, maybe I can fix them up into some presentable little pages.