Comic 36 - Petty Beach, page25

Posted on 13th Mar 2014, 3:40 PM in Petty Beach
Petty Beach, page25
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Sajan Rai 13th Mar 2014, 3:40 PM edit delete
Sajan Rai
Kinda gross and soppy, but was happy with how easily this page came out. Also, dialogue-wise, probably the first instance of anything close to breathing space.


quetzlsacatanango 13th Mar 2014, 4:49 PM edit delete reply
"Let me show you something that will make you feel young as when the world was new."

Adam and Eve-ish!
Sajan Rai 13th Mar 2014, 4:59 PM edit delete reply
Sajan Rai
Perhaps that sheep should be bleating "KHAAAAN"
RubberGardener 13th Mar 2014, 8:22 PM edit delete reply
Again, great work. You're right about the "breathing room." It's pretty refreshing, actually, but don't let that stop you from doing pages like you have been. As I've said before, your layouts are awesome, and it's partially due to them being crammed. It keeps me wanting to keep looking at each page longer, rather than glossing over it. I know some people might say it's not a good thing to make your readers have to work hard at reading and looking at the art, but the way you do it is perfect.
Sajan Rai 13th Mar 2014, 10:22 PM edit delete reply
Sajan Rai
Cheers! That's actually great to know. There was actually going to be more dialogue on this page, but I realised it's better off crammed on to the next page (which'll be the last)